Nowadays congestion and Traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in our opinion?

It is undeniable that

roads

are

fundamental

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part of city construction.

However

, one of the widely discussed problems nowadays is

traffic

on

roads

. One of the main reasons behind

that is

the

big

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amount

of

transports

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transport

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on the

road

. As we know, in

contemporary

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the contemporary

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world

vast

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the vast

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majority of citizens have

cars

. In the recent research of Istanbul

University

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University,

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there was

a

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data that nearly 33 per cent of

population

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the population

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has 2 or more

cars

, which

is affect

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to

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the

road

movement system.

This

could lead to

traffic

jams or may

result

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result in

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different car accidents. To tackle

this

problem

government

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the government

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should increase the

amount

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number

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of

roads

and make transport

roads

more

comfortable

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convenient

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to

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for

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the

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movement. By doing it government will make

roads

wider and will prevent different types of car accidents. China which is one go the most developed countries in the whole world effectively use

this

technique and has incredible results.

In contrast

with

previous

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the previous

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decade

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decade,

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the number of

traffic

jams in

this

country decreased to

the

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25 per cent.

Furthermore

, people can use public

transports

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transport

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and reduce the

amount

of

cars

on the

road

.

This

may be the easiest and so the best way to prevent

traffic

on

roads

. Having weighed everything mentioned

up

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, we can come to

a

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conclusion that

traffic

on the

roads

is

modern

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a modern

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issue that was created by the different needs of society.

However

,

this

problem has

number

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a number

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of solutions

such

as making

roads

bigger and wider and reduce

amount

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the amount

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of

cars

on the

road

. So it would not be surprising to see some big

traffics

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traffic

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on the

roads

in the near future. But if actions

will be

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are

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taken urgently,

otherwise

we will get cities without

of

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traffic

jams and with more

safe

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safer

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movement system.