The diagrams below show the floor plans for a trade conference in 2009 and the same conference in 2010

The diagrams below show the floor plans for a trade conference in 2009 and the same conference in 2010
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The blueprints depict how the trade
conference
was renovated from 2009 to 2010.
Overall
, the
conference
underwent a number of dramatic changes
while
both of the entrances remained untouched.
Additionally
, it is noteworthy there was a minor difference between the
balcony
and the registration, which had been merely extended. Beginning with the east of the
conference
, as far as the still-standing registration was concerned, it was
then
expanded by setting up one more place for enrolling, which was adjacent to the
balcony
. In terms of the
balcony
, even though it remained in place, the lounge
area
was added for consumers.
Furthermore
, the exhibition
area
which was in front of the
balcony
, was relocated in 2010. Moving onto the west half of the
conference
, where the exhibition
area
was not only made bigger but
also
it was shifted to the left corner facing the main entrance. Meanwhile, the
area
which it used to be at , had been replaced by the stage that had been combined with the concert hall and the seat. A final point of interest is the meeting room
along with
the display
area
no longer existed in 2010 in order to pave the way for tourists.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words conference, balcony, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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