You are bored in your current job but you enjoy working for your company. You think you would be happier if you moved to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be moved to a position in another department explain how you feel about your current position and your career say why you think changing your job would be good for you and the company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my
feeling
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working
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in a postal department. I have been working in
this
area for
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five years and
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continuously
working on the same assignment does not give me a sense of fulfillment
at the end
of the day. I would like to move to
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department
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a
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front desk for a change of environment. I Have been working as a postal application submission,
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and
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the application in the system.
This
work does not thrill me anymore.
Also
, it is the same task which I have to perform
everyday
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. There is no human interaction which
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a sense of dissatisfaction, unfulfillment and
beacme
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became
become
boring. I feel like
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am not growing in my life. and my
carrer
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career
aspirations are stuck somewhere. I wanted to request you to change my position in the
fornt
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front
line department, which give me new challenges and when
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will be done. I may feel like, I have achieved something. Not only
this
, it will be beneficial for the company,
due to
my communication,
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problem-solving
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solving
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and
decision making
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skills which
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essiential
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essential
for the submission officer, as they find ways to help people. Kindly consider my request
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account and I hope to
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from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Harshit Kaur
Submitted by harshitkaur321 on

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The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for a letter to an employer.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are done correctly, enhancing the formal structure of the letter.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciative
  • monotonous
  • unfulfilling
  • company culture
  • professional growth
  • passionate
  • transfer request
  • skill set
  • career advancement
  • boost morale
  • maximize potential
  • team synergy
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