The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the prevalence of outlets which are closed and open between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, it is clear that
the total shop closures are higher than openings. However
, there are two years in the record that shops
are opened more than closed.
To begin
with, the total closing shops
in 2011 started at well over 6000 and then
it fluctuated to nearly 6500 in the year 2014. The noticeable oscillation was seen from the year 2014 and arrived at approximately 5200 in 2016. Moreover
, shop closures slightly varied and ended the period at 5200.
Additionally
, The quantity of shop openings began at 8500 in 2011 and it dramatically plummeted to roughly 4000 in the next year. It surged to just under 6200 in 2014 which is where the gap between the closures and the openings is the closest. Furthermore
, The closing shops
trend dropped to 4000 in 2015 and it was when the total of both types of shops
was the widest. Lastly
, it levelled off at around 4000 up to 2017 before nosediving again to exactly 3000.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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