The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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of both males and females who passed their driving

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in one Asian country over the course of 30 years.

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, between 1980 and 2010, the

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of women who succeeded in the

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dominated the

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of men in general.

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, in 2000, the

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of females reached its vertex, compared to other years,

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the highest peak for males was in 2000 and 2010.

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with, in 2000 the

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of women who passed their driving

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hit its climax at just

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in 2010 it reduced to approximately 64. Meanwhile, in 2000 and 2010, the

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of males who succeeded in their

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attained the highest

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point

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just below 50.

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, in previous years both genders had

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low rate of those who passed the

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. In 1980, women had about 48

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,

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the next year it rose to just above 50.

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at the start of the first

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the

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of men accounted for about 29 respectively,

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it climbed to 39

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