The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The chart provides data on
percentage
of both males and females who passed their driving Add an article
the percentage
test
in one Asian country over the course of 30 years.
Overall
, between 1980 and 2010, the percentage
of women who succeeded in the test
dominated the percentage
of men in general. Nevertheless
, in 2000, the percentage
of females reached its vertex, compared to other years, whereas
the highest peak for males was in 2000 and 2010.
To begin
with, in 2000 the percentage
of women who passed their driving test
hit its climax at just beneath
70. Following Change preposition
below
which
in 2010 it reduced to approximately 64. Meanwhile, in 2000 and 2010, the Correct pronoun usage
this
percentage
of males who succeeded in their test
attained the highest for
Change preposition
apply
them
point Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
just below 50.
Change preposition
at
On the other hand
, in previous years both genders had relatively
low rate of those who passed the Add an article
a relatively
test
. In 1980, women had about 48 percentage
, Replace the word
per cent
while
the next year it rose to just above 50. Likewise
at the start of the first Add a comma
Likewise,
year
the Add a comma
year,
percentage
of men accounted for about 29 respectively, then
it climbed to 39 percentages
.Replace the word
per cent
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