The bar graph demonstrates the
production
of Use synonyms
coffee
in four different countries which are ( Use synonyms
Brazil
,Colombia,Indonesia and Vietnam) in the period of 1990 to 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
Brazil
outnumber the other three countries in Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
coffee
Use synonyms
production
over the whole period. Use synonyms
By contrast
, Vietnam had the lowest Linking Words
coffee
Use synonyms
production
.
Use synonyms
Brazil
had a rise over the whole period and it reached Use synonyms
to
2 Million Tonnes in 2010. Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, Colombia reached Linking Words
it
maximum Change the pronoun
its
production
in 1990 where it reached to around 0.6 Million Tonnes of Use synonyms
coffee
. Use synonyms
Brazil
kept increasing over the years but Colombia had Fluctuations but Use synonyms
still
the second Add a missing verb
is still
higher
Correct word choice
highest
coffee
Use synonyms
production
country after Use synonyms
Brazil
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Vietnam had a gradual increase over the years. Linking Words
Whereas
, Indonesia Linking Words
was
maintained Unnecessary verb
apply
with
the same Change preposition
apply
production
between the years 1990 and 1995 and Use synonyms
then
it rose Linking Words
afterward
. both countries reached a surge in the year 2010.Change the spelling
afterwards
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