The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.
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The bar graph demonstrates the
production
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of
coffee
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in four different countries which are (
Brazil
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,Colombia,Indonesia and Vietnam) in the period of 1990 to 2010.
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,
Brazil
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outnumber the other three countries in
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coffee
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production
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over the whole period.
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, Vietnam had the lowest
coffee
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production
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.
Brazil
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had a rise over the whole period and it reached
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2 Million Tonnes in 2010.
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, Colombia reached
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maximum
production
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in 1990 where it reached to around 0.6 Million Tonnes of
coffee
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.
Brazil
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kept increasing over the years but Colombia had Fluctuations but
still
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the second
higher
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highest
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coffee
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production
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country after
Brazil
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.
On the other hand
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, Vietnam had a gradual increase over the years.
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, Indonesia
was
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maintained
with
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the same
production
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between the years 1990 and 1995 and
then
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it rose
afterward
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. both countries reached a surge in the year 2010.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, coffee, brazil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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