The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2o40. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates data which compares the present and future proportions of the urban population between 1970 and 2040 in four distinctive Asian nations:
Philippines
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the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia
.
Overall
, two
countries have experienced Correct article usage
the two
an
exponential growth in their respective quantity of people (Remove the article
apply
Malaysia
and Indonesia
), with Malaysia
consistently being the country with the greatest amount. Meanwhile contrary to these two nations, Thailand
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and the
Philippines
have seen a much more gradual change. Similar trends are forecasted for the years 2030 and 2040, although
the respective amounts for Thailand
and Philippines
are estimated to converge at a faster rate.
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the Philippines
To begin
with, Malaysia
has witnessed a steady increase
from around 30% of the people living in urban settlements to approximately 70% from
1970 and 2020, meaning that it has more than doubled in its quantity and has Change preposition
between
went
through the greatest Change the verb form
gone
increase
. On the contrary
, the Philippines
’ volume has fluctuated throughout in comparison to other countries. This
is because it has
peaked at around 50% in 1990 after a plateau at 30% Unnecessary verb
apply
initially
, before experiencing a downward trend to roughly 40% in 2010. By contrast
, Thailand
and Indonesia
have seen much more stable growth unlike
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, unlike
Malaysia
and Philippines
. By 2020 Indonesia
has reached its peak of around 49%, with a precipitous increase
from 40% in 1970. Having said this
, Thailand
has seen the most marginal rise to around 29% in the same year.
Future projections on
the other hand, predict that whilst Add the comma(s)
, on
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the Phillipines
Phillipines
is predicted to continue to dominate with its figures, Correct your spelling
Philippines
Thailand
is estimated to witness the greatest increase
of around 10%. Therefore
, this
will mean that Philippines
and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
are expected to converge even further
in the upcoming 20 year
period.Add a hyphen
20-year
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