The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates data which compares the present and future proportions of the urban population between 1970 and 2040 in four distinctive Asian nations: the
Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand
and Indonesia
.
Overall
, the two countries have experienced exponential growth in their respective quantity of people (Malaysia and Indonesia
), meanwhile
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Thailand
and the Philippines
have seen a much more gradual change. Similar trends are forecasted for all countries for the years 2030 and 2040, although
the respective amounts for Thailand
and the Philippines
are estimated to converge at a faster rate.
To begin
with, Malaysia has witnessed a steady increase from around 30% of the people living in urban settlements to approximately 70% between 1970 and 2020, meaning that it has more than doubled in its
quantity and has gone through the greatest increase. Correct pronoun usage
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On the contrary
, the Philippines
’ volume has fluctuated throughout in comparison to other countries. This
is because it peaked at around 50% in 1990 after a plateau at 30% initially
, before experiencing a downward trend to roughly 40% in 2010. By contrast
, Thailand
and Indonesia
have seen much more stable growth. By 2020 Indonesia
has reached its peak of around 49%, with a precipitous increase from 40% in 1970. Having said this
, Thailand
has seen the most marginal rise to around 29% in the same year.
Future projections , on the other hand
, predict that whilst Philippines
is predicted to continue to dominate with its figures, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
is estimated to witness the greatest upsurge of around 10%. Therefore
, this
will mean that the Philippines
and Thailand
are expected to converge even further
in the upcoming 20-year period.Submitted by nejla.abdullayeva on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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