The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power
The picture depicts
about
the cycle of producing healthy drinking Change preposition
apply
water
by using photovoltaic panels with optimized renewable energy. Overall
, there are three steps involved, which include energy transformation, water
process
, and generating proper water
to drink.
The first process
of drinkable water
starts with solar panel
receiving sun energy Fix the agreement mistake
panels
then
changes into electricity pump equipment, subsequently
the pump machine which has high pressure turn on to flow the water
in to
the filter Join the words
into
process
.
The next stage is the water
process
. The groundwater rises to the water
filter machine which has different size
screens to separate the Correct your spelling
different-sized
water
from the unuseful things such
as soil contains, dirt, germs, and bacteria.
Afterwards, the clean water
is gathered in the huge tank which has automatic
valve to flow the drinkable Add an article
an automatic
water
into the moveable container. This
tank is located above the wooden platform near the water
sources. Ultimately, drinkable water
already
to serve for everyone in the university.Add a missing verb
is already
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