The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
chat
illustrates the percentage of Correct your spelling
chart
men
and women
who were not educated in different parts of the world in the previous year. Overall
, women
always had a higher illiteracy percentage than men
, especially in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Asia
, where Correct article usage
a signifiant
signifiant
amount of the population Correct your spelling
significant
were
lacking Change the verb form
was
of
the ability to read or write.
Remove the preposition
apply
According to
the data shown, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Asia
are the top three illiterate regions, with the largest percentage of illiterate population. Approximately 90% of people in South Asia
were uneducated, whereas
the figures of
Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States were more than 80%. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, the illiteracy rates of women
in these three regions were about one third
higher than Add a hyphen
one-third
men
's.
However
, there were lower illiteracy rates in Latin American
(22%) and East Correct your spelling
America
Asia
(30%), as well as
developed
countries (3%). Change preposition
in developed
Similarity
, the differences between the rates of different gender were lower in Latin American and developed countries. Replace the word
Similarly
In contrast
, the number of uneducated men
were
around half of Change the verb form
was
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the women's
women's
in East Change noun form
women
Asia
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