The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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illustrates the percentage of
men
and
women
who were not educated in different parts of the world in the previous year.
Overall
,
women
always had a higher illiteracy percentage than
men
, especially in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
, where
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signifiant
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significant
amount of the population
were
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lacking
of
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the ability to read or write.
According to
the data shown, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
are the top three illiterate regions, with the largest percentage of illiterate population. Approximately 90% of people in South
Asia
were uneducated,
whereas
the figures
of
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Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States were more than 80%.
Moreover
, the illiteracy rates of
women
in these three regions were about
one third
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higher than
men
's.
However
, there were lower illiteracy rates in Latin
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America
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(22%) and East
Asia
(30%),
as well as
developed
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countries (3%).
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, the differences between the rates of different gender were lower in Latin American and developed countries.
In contrast
, the number of uneducated
men
were
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around half of
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women's
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women
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in East
Asia
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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