The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graphs provide information on
crime
in the UK for the last
year. The information was broken down into age groups and four types of crime
. Overall
, British
Correct article usage
the British
whose
Correct pronoun usage
apply
age
between 16 to 24 had the highest Wrong verb form
aged
crime
rate, whereas
the majority committed crimes
related to violent
, property and Replace the word
violence
drug
.
People Fix the agreement mistake
drugs
with
the Change preposition
between
age
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ages
between
16 to 28 committed the majority of Change preposition
of
crimes
last
year. According to
the line graph, there was an upward trend of teenagers (between 12 to 20 years old) committing crimes
, the number soared from 50,000 to 700,000 and peaked at 800,000. When they grew older, the figures ebbed to 200,000 and decline
steadily to less than 10,000.
Violent Wrong verb form
declined
accounts
Wrong verb form
accounted
of
the majority of Change preposition
for
crime
committed in the UK Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
last
year with
46% Change preposition
at
while
property and drug crimes
were each half of that figure, with the former at 23% and the latter at 22%. A minority of people committed public order crime
, at 9%.Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
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