You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data provides information on how many fresh
fish
were caught locally and imported
in
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into
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Perth
over a 10-year
period
.
Overall
, the major fresh
fish
supply in
Perth
was from local catchers, only a small amount was imported. Even though the figures fluctuated over the
period
, the total supply of fresh
fish
had increased by 2014 . The major supply of fresh
fish
in
Perth
was coming from Australian catchers, at over 80% of the supply each year, and the amount nearly doubled, from 2677.7 metric
tons
to 5031.9
ton
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tons
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, over the
period
. At the beginning of the
period
, there
was
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were
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2677.7 metric
tons
fresh
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of fresh
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fish
caught locally.
Then
, the figures steadily increased until reached
the
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peak at 8136.2
tons
in 2008, which was three times higher than that in 2014. Starting from 2009, the numbers declined and fluctuated between 6831.1 and 4271.3 until the data shown in 2014, at 5031.9.
Similarly
, the amount of
imports
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imported
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fresh
fish
increased over the
period
. In 2004, 464.5 fresh
fish
was imported. The figure dropped by half in 2005 before
soared
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to 830.5 in two years.
Then
, the number increased steadily and reached the summit at 1203.7 in 2010 before the number started to decline.
At the end
of the
period
, 782.7 metric
tons
fresh
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of fresh
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fish
was imported to
Perth
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, perth, period, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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