You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the recycling process of
glass
.
Overall
, a used
glass
bottle will go through four stages,
include
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transport, cleaning,
reproduce
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reproduction
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and
deliver
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, before going back on
market
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the market
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for
sell
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sale
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. The
glass
products that consumers get from
the
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apply
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supermarkets may be
a
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product
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products
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from
glass
recycling. After people empty the jars, they may recycle
that
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them
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by putting the empty
bottle
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bottles
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in the recycle bin.
Then
the
recycle
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company collects those and delivers them to the treatment plant by truck. At the next stage, glasses go through the cleaning process and
being
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washed and sterilised by a washing and sterilising machine before getting ready for reproduction. Before moulding, glasses need to go through the crushing and melting machine. At
this
stage, glasses are crushed into small pieces and heated
with
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high
temperature
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temperatures
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until becoming molten. After that, the molten will be shaped in the moulding machine. Once the products are ready, they will,
then
, be delivered to
grocery
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store for
sell
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sale
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.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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