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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates the process of how nuclear
energy
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 is produced by uranium. The process has six main stages.
Overall
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, we can see that nuclear
energy
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 is a reliable and renewable source of
energy
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.
Firstly
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, uranium is drilled from the underground and it is sent to a power plant where it is processed to nuclear power. After being delivered to the plant, uranium ore needs to
be go
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go
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 through a conversion and enrichment process to make
a
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apply
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fuel
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 pellets, U-235 in order for it to
use
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be used
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 as a
fuel
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 for power.
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,
this
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fuel
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are
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is
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 sent to a place where
they
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it
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 powers generators to produce electricity.
This
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 kind of nuclear
energy
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 is renewable
which
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and
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 has a lifespan of four years;
therefore
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, spent
fuel
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 can be re-processed and re-used before
they
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it
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 has been used up. Radioactive wastes, which require special handling before disposal,
is
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are
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 produced
at the end
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 stage. For safety
reason
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reasons
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, these wastes need to be stored in containers and buried.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, fuel with synonyms.
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