You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the process of how nuclear
energy
is produced by uranium. The process has six main stages. Overall
, we can see that nuclear energy
is a reliable and renewable source of energy
. Firstly
, uranium is drilled from the underground and it is sent to a power plant where it is processed to nuclear power. After being delivered to the plant, uranium ore needs to be go
through a conversion and enrichment process to make Change the verb form
go
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
fuel
pellets, U-235 in order for it to use
as a Wrong verb form
be used
fuel
for power. Then
, this
fuel
are
sent to a place where Change the verb form
is
they
powers generators to produce electricity. Correct pronoun usage
it
This
kind of nuclear energy
is renewable which
has a lifespan of four years; Correct word choice
and
therefore
, spent fuel
can be re-processed and re-used before they
has been used up. Radioactive wastes, which require special handling before disposal, Correct pronoun usage
it
is
produced Correct subject-verb agreement
are
at the end
stage. For safety reason
, these wastes need to be stored in containers and buried.Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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