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The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
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The given table illustrates the proportion of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
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, It can be viewed that the
number
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 of total
workers
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the
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 factory had
was
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decreased and the job field was dominated by
male
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males
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 gender rather than
female
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females
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 gender in between 1851 and 1901.
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 with, the
number
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 of total
workers
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was
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roughly decreased where
it
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started
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starting
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 from 130.750
people
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year
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 1851 and ended up
with
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at
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 38.942
people
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 in the
year
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 1901.
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, in the
year
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 1861, the
number
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 of total
workers
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 was about 109.869
people
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 and it fell
into
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to
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 more than
a
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half
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number
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the number
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 in the
year
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 1891 with about 49.025
people
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.
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, the
number
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 of female
workers
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was
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decreased from 76.786
people
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 in the
year
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 1851 to 67.933
people
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 in the
year
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 1861
and
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followed
with
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 the
number
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 of male
workers
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that
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which
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 slightly decreased from 53.964
people
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 in the
year
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 1851 to about 41.936
people
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in
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ten years later.
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Furthermore
, the
number
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 of male
workers
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 fell
into
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to
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 about 13.375
people
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 in
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year
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the year
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 1901, followed by
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number
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a number
the number
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 of female
workers
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 with
appoximately
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approximately
 twice
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number
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the number
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 of male
workers
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 which was about 25.567
people
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, workers, people, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Industrial expansion
  • Manufacturing hub
  • Technological innovation
  • Economic contribution
  • Productivity enhancement
  • Global market dynamics
  • Urbanization
  • Workforce demographics
  • Production scale
  • Social implications
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