The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
The given table illustrates the proportion of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Overall
, It can be viewed that the number
of total workers
the
factory had Change preposition
in the
was
decreased and the job field was dominated by Unnecessary verb
apply
male
gender rather than Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
gender in between 1851 and 1901.
Fix the agreement mistake
females
To begin
with, the number
of total workers
was
roughly decreased where Unnecessary verb
apply
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
started
from 130.750 Wrong verb form
starting
people
in year
1851 and ended up Change the article
the year
with
38.942 Change preposition
at
people
in the year
1901. Moreover
, in the year
1861, the number
of total workers
was about 109.869 people
and it fell into
more than Change preposition
to
a
half Correct article usage
apply
number
in the Correct article usage
the number
year
1891 with about 49.025 people
.
In addition
, the number
of female workers
was
decreased from 76.786 Unnecessary verb
apply
people
in the year
1851 to 67.933 people
in the year
1861 and
followed Correct word choice
apply
with
the Change preposition
by
number
of male workers
that
slightly decreased from 53.964 Correct pronoun usage
which
people
in the year
1851 to about 41.936 people
in
ten years later. Change preposition
apply
Futhermore
, the Correct your spelling
Furthermore
number
of male workers
fell into
about 13.375 Change preposition
to
people
in year
1901, followed by Change the article
the year
number
of female Change the article
a number
the number
workers
with appoximately
twice Correct your spelling
approximately
number
of male Correct article usage
the number
workers
which was about 25.567 people
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, workers, people, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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