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The table shows the population ratio of females per 100 males in six different areas (Africa, Asia, Europe, North America, Central America, and Oceania) in 1995 and 2005. Summarize and report key features.

The table shows the population ratio of females per 100 males in six different areas (Africa, Asia, Europe, North America, Central America, and Oceania) in 1995 and 2005. Summarize and report key features.
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The given table compares the population fraction of
females
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 per 100 males in six various continents in the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the number of
females
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 has seen
the
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 downward pattern in Asia, North
America
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, Central
America
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 and Oceania during the
periods
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 of ten years.
On the contrary
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, those in
Africa
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 and
Europe
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 had an upward trend. In 1995,
furthermore
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,
he
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 ratio of
females
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 in Asia was a bit higher than that in the other areas, at 105.3, which was followed by Oceania, North
America
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, Central
America
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,
Africa
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 and
Europe
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 stood at 103.9, 100.1, and 100 respectively.
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, the figures for each of them declined by the year 2005, especially in Oceania which dropped by 4.1 from 103.9.
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, the figure for
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 in
Africa
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 and
Europe
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 had a growth way.
Additionaly
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, women in
Africa
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 slightly increased by 1.4 over ten years, which initial ratio
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Africa
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 was 97.8 and grew
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to 99.2.
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Europe
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 started from 89.4 to 92.8 which was the biggest increase.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females, america, africa, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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