The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates
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sites of social media actively accessed by each person between 2014 and 2015.
Overall
, more than 80% and 70% in 2014 and 2015, respectively, of citizens were using
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two
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social and messaging applications. The majority of people surf only
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one site, both in 2014 and 2015. Though in 2014 it reached almost 40% of activity, the percentage of one-site users
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decreased by eight in the next year. As obviously shown in the graph, people
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likely to have more than 2 platforms, with
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approximately
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less than 30% in both years. The users of zero up to two sites between two years are quite similar.
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, it dropped significantly, nearly a half, when it comes to three platforms, and gradually dropped in the next account numbers owned. The least of
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own
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five social media accounts, which
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as
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small as 2% and 4%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • monthly active users
  • social network services
  • messaging services
  • time frame
  • observe a trend
  • fluctuation
  • noticeable increase
  • significant decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • exponential growth
  • relative decline
  • steady rise
  • dramatic fall
  • comparative analysis
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