The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates
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sites of social media actively accessed by each person between 2014 and 2015.
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the numeral
Overall
, more than 80% and 70% in 2014 and 2015, respectively, of citizens were using maximum
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a maximum
two
social and messaging applications. The majority of people surf only Change preposition
of two
in
one site, both in 2014 and 2015. Though in 2014 it reached almost 40% of activity, the percentage of one-site users Change preposition
on
has
decreased by eight in the next year.
As obviously shown in the graph, people Unnecessary verb
apply
less
likely to have more than 2 platforms, with Add a missing verb
are less
total
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a total
approximately
less than 30% in both years. The users of zero up to two sites between two years are quite similar. Change preposition
of approximately
However
, it dropped significantly, nearly a half, when it comes to three platforms, and gradually dropped in the next account numbers owned. The least of population
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the population
own
five social media accounts, which Change the verb form
owns
accounted
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account
as
small as 2% and 4%.Change preposition
for as
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