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This graph shows the amount of money spent on books in germany, france, Italy and Australia between 1995 to 2005.

This graph shows the amount of money spent on books in germany, france, Italy and Australia between 1995 to 2005.
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The provided line graph illustrates how much
money
 was spent on
books
,in four various European countries over a decade. A glance at the graph reveals that there was an upward trend for
money
 expenditure
in
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books
 in Germany,France,Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005.
on
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 the other meaning,people
prefered
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preferred
 to read
books
 in these European countries over the period. In 1995,people paid
money
 for
books
 to around
of
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80
million
dollars
 in Germany and it peaked at just under 100
million
dollars
 in 2005.(Which was the highest amount of expenditure over the whole period).
Moreover
,as regards France,Spending
money
 on
books
initiated
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 at just over 50
million
dollars
 in 1995 and
then
,It experienced a slight increase and
following
this
,reached
to
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nearly 75
million
dollars
 in 2005.
Similarly
,the average of
money
 which was spent
for
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books
 was exactly 50
million
dollars
 in Italy in 1995.After which,with a modest climb It turned to roughly 60
million
dollars
 in 2005.Interestingly,
money
spending
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 was the least amount for purchasing
books
 in Austria in 1995.Next,there was a moderate rise
for
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in
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 people who paid their income for buying
books
 in Austria in the first six
year
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years
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 in Germany between 1995 to 2001.
However
,
at the end
 of the trend It rocketed
at
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to
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 just over 70
million
dollars
 in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, books, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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