The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in both genders in the same four months between the years 2008 and 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest unemployment rate of graduates takes place in October in two consecutive years.
On the contrary
, They are mostly available for jobs in April'08 and July'08.
To begin
with, in Oct'09, the fraction of unemployed male and female youngsters accounted for 22% and 14% and came in first place.
Besides
, the difference between male and female youths in
this
month was the widest.
However
, it was followed by Oct'08 which was less than in Oct'09 by 6% in men and 3% in women.
Furthermore
, in Jan'09 and April'09, the percentage of male individuals was at 12%,
whereas
, female learners were at 9% and 6% respectively.
Additionally
, April'08 and July'08 had the same trajectory in both genders, which were roughly 7% in males and 6% in females, and they came in
last
place. The smallest gap between
two
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genders was seen in July'09, approximately at 1%.
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