The animal species are becoming extint due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reason and solution ?

Human activities on the

land

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and the

sea

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area lead to the extinction of some animal

species

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.

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the causes of

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case and put forward a number of solutions. There are many reasons that contribute

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why human activities both on the

land

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and the

sea

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zone cause

extinction

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the extinction

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of

animals

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.

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, because there is a limited space as a habitat for

animal

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animals

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. It is

due to

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many

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land

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such

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as grassland and forests

are

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being

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diminished and replaced by agricultural practices and industrial

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companies

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.

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,

for

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animals

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which live in the

sea

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, their habitat currently

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polluted by

rubishes

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rubbishes

rubbish

and chemical substances.

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condition causes the

species

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in the water

become

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unsafe.

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, many

animals

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lose the opportunity to breed as a way to preserve their existence. Because the number of the

species

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is reduced,

so

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the probability

for

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breeding is quite small. The

innapropriate

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inappropriate

condition

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can not support the

animals

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to use their reproduction system maximally. There are many solutions to deal with

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problems

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. One of them is providing and establishing more

number of

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preservation

area

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areas

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like zoos or conservation parks.

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, local government can

contributes

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by allocating financial aid in order to cure and take care

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of animal

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animal

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animals

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that are vulnerable to

be

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becoming

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extinct. In conclusion, the reason why

species

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of

animals

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become extinct

caused

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is

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human activities both on

land

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or the

sea

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because their habitat is replaced by human practices and small probability for them to

do breeding

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breed

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. The solutions for

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problem are establishing more preservation areas and encouraging local

goverment

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government

governments

to provide

a

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financial aid to tackle

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problem.