The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided table illustrates numeral information about the office building's
coffee
shop's sales over the time period of 13 hours.
Overall
, It is clear that
sales have decreased as time passed. Besides
, Coffee
was the best-seller item in this
table.
To begin
, From 7.30 to 10.30, The store's sales were 700, 256 Coffees, 100 Teas, 275 Pastries and 50 Sandwiches
. Moreover
, From 10.30 to 2.30, the Coffee
shop sold 185 Coffee
, 50 Tea
, 95 Pastries and 200 Sandwiches
. Sandwiches
were the maximum and tea
was the minimum number on this
raw. Furthermore
, From 2.30 to 5.30, 145 Coffee
, 35 Tea
, 150 Pastries and 40 Sandwiches
were sold. In addition
, At 5.30-8.30, We can see on the table that coffee
was the best-seller of this
period of time. In total, The first product was sold 795 times, the second one 270, the third one 600 and the last
one 400 times. finally
, Tea
's number was the lowest.Submitted by alikiadaah on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sandwiches, tea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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