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The chart below shows information about the favorite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B.

The chart below shows information about the favorite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B.
What has been depicted in the bar graph is the subjects that
students
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 in
school
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 A and
B
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 were interested in reading.
Overall
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, the subject of
sports
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 emerged as
top
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a top
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 choice in
school
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 A across all the categories;
however
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, the go-to of
schoolchild
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schoolchildren
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 to
science
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 was lowest in
school
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B
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.
Moreover
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,
sports
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 and
science
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 were more popular among
students
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 in
school
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 A,
whereas
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 the opposite is true for
school
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B
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. In terms of
school
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 A, the majority of
students
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 showed a strong inclination towards
sports
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,
according to
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 35%, followed by
science
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 (just below 10).
In contrast
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,
students
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 did not prefer subjects
such
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 as social sciences and language, each of them
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not more than 6%. Drawing, meanwhile, ranked
last
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, which was a bit under 5% of student's preference. Regarding
the
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school
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B
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,
although
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science
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 was the least
favored
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 subject, the share number of pupils were interested in craft and language, with
former
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the former
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was
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being
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 a quarter, and the latter
was
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apply
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nearly 17 per cent.
Moreover
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, the
subject
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subjects
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 of social
science
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 and
sports
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 were less popular among
students
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 compared to
sports
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, which received half the preference
of
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 social
science
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, school, b, sports, science with synonyms.
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