The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the changes in the village of Stokeford from 1930 to 2010. the location of the bridge that
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essay covers the changing spaces about
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between
both
pictures, the comparisons between them and their features.
In 1930 and in
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according to
both
photos
there was no displacementAdd a comma
photos,
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in
both
were along the Stoke River. There were shops and a post office in west
, but in 2010, the shops were demolished, Add an article
the west
only
the post office remained. Farmland was in the east and south in 1930, Correct word choice
and only
however
it was eliminated in 2010. Primary Add a comma
however,
school
located in the west Fix the agreement mistake
schools
was
different in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
both
site and apperance
in 2010 than it was Correct your spelling
appearance
1930
. Change preposition
in 1930
While
there was a modification in the presence of the parks, a retirement house was built in 2010 instead
of a large house in 1930. The number of remaining key houses was 9 in 1930, and in 2010, it increased and they even took place on farms.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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