The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the types of
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that undergraduates who major in anthropology chose after graduation, and the table
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salaries of them after five years in different industries.
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, the majority of
graduates
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started working full-time, followed by part-time jobs and remaining unemployed, with the smallest percentage of
graduates
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continuing postgraduate studies and part-time employment at the same time. Compared to independent consultants and workers of private companies, the typical wage in the government
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is significantly greater. Delving into the pie chart, 52% of anthropology
graduates
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had full-time jobs, compared to 15% who had part-time jobs.
Graduates
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who were unemployed made up 12% of the total,
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there is no information on the remaining 8% of
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. Only 8% of people completed their full-time studies,
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the other 5% continued to work part-time and pursue postgraduate school simultaneously. Turning to the table, it reveals that 50% of anthropology
graduates
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employed in the public
sector
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made an average salary of over $100,000, as opposed to just 40% and 30% of their peers who worked as independent consultants or in the private
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.
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, the average salary for 20% of
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working in the public
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and doing freelance consulting was between $25,000 and $74,999,
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45% of the private business employees were earning the same.
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,
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who joined private enterprises made less money
overall
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than those who worked in the other two sectors.
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