the chart below show the shares of expenditures for five major categories in UK US Canada and Japan in the year 2009.
The given graph illustrates the expenditure share of five categories in 4 specific
countries
in 2009.
Generally speaking, the highest expenditure from most nations in that year was housing, except Japan, where they spent the most money on food. Additionally
, healthcare and clothing had the lowest spend among all countries
.
Looking at the data more closely, it can be observed that the rate of housing in the United States was the highest of other categories at more than 25%. Following
this
was Canada United Kingdom and Japan, which varied from 20% to nearly 25% making it higher than others spent except for Japan spending most on food at approximately 23%. While
other countries
just ranged from 14% to under 20%. Regarding transportation, the Japanese only spent 10% of the budget, meanwhile, the Canadians had double this
,20%.
Turning to healthcare and clothing, it is evident that the rate of budget in the US which was spent on healthcare at 7% higher than in other countries
. This
is true with the household finance in Canada on clothing at 6%. The financial outlay in these shares of 5 countries
is just between 2% and 7%.Submitted by ACE THE IELTS TEST 😎😎😎 on
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