The charts below show the aversage percentages intypical meals of three types of nutrients, all of whihc may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the aversage percentages intypical meals of three types of nutrients, all of whihc may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of three basic meals of people in the USA, containing three unhealthy nutrients if intaken excessively.
Overall
, three unhealthy substances found in almost every meals are
sodium
, saturated fat, and sugar. In average,
sodium
and fat is found the most in
dinner
,
while
snacks contain the highest percentage of added sugar. The major unhealthy nutirent found in
dinner
is
sodium
, accounting for 43 per
cent
of the chart and 29 per
cent
in lunch,
while
in breakfast and snacks,
sodium
is present at 14 percent. Like
sodium
, saturated fat is there in
dinner
, found at 37 percent. It is
also
there in lunch, snacks, and breakfast at 26, 21 and 16 per
cent
in order. Added sugar is the major substance in snack, accounting for 42 per
cent
: 23 per
cent
in
dinner
: 19 per
cent
in lunch; and 16 per
cent
in breakfast. In conclusion, American people are prone to intake these unhealthy nutirents from every meals.
However
, if one meal is skipped,
this
could reduce the amount of these unhealthy substances in to the body as stated that they should be eaten at the right amount to prevent the accumulation of them in the body.
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