The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian
male
and females in various age groups who did regular physical exertion in 2010.
The general overview here is thatFix the agreement mistake
males
,
the age groups of men significantly fluctuated over the period. And the Remove the comma
apply
female
who did exercise Fix the agreement mistake
females
was
almost bigger than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Correct article usage
the male
male
.
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males
According to
the data, Australian male youngsters occupied 52.8% while
female adolescents were at 47.7%. In the next age group, which was 25-34, the percent
of male adults dropped by roughly 10% but female individuals slightly Replace the word
percentage
rise
up by 2%. Wrong verb form
rose
Furthermore
, male athletes still decreased to 39.5% and female athletes escalated to 52.5% in the 35-44 group.
Additionally
, the percentage of both men and women in
citizens around 45-54 years jumped to 53.3% and 43.1 respectively. Change preposition
apply
However
, in 55-64 female population unnoticeably fell to 53% besides
the male population increased by 2%. In the last
group, both male and female Australians doing physical activity almost had the same ratio.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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