The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The chart illustrates the changes in the sales of
video
material / DVDs, games software and
CDs
around the world in billions of dollars over a three-year period. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the purchase of games software and DVD/
video
in the international market showed an upward trend,
whereas
a reverse pattern could be observed in the data on
CDs
over the surveyed period. In 2000, the worldwide sales for
CDs
were highest, at $35
billion
bn,
while
the figure for DVD/
video
was lower, at around $18
billion
. Game
softwares
Correct your spelling
software
Softwares
,
however
, accounted for the lowest number, at about $12
billion
. From 2000 to 2003, worldwide sales of
CDs
witnessed a decline to somewhere in the vicinity of $31
billion
in 2003,
whereas
there was a steady rise in that of the data on Games software to around $19
billion
in the final year.
In addition
, there was a gradual increase in the figure
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
DVD/
video
, reaching a peak at $30
billion
at the end
of the provided time frame.
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