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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph provides key information about the proportion of
exports
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 from Australia to four world regions between 1990 and 2012, with units measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Australian
exports
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 with
India
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 and the USA represented the lowest rate by the end of the period.
In addition
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, Japan saw the highest ratio of Australian
exports
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, in 1990,
whereas
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 the lowest percentage was experienced by China and
India
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.
According to
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 what is shown, in 1990, 25% was the biggest rate of
exports
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 from Australia to Japan and declined rapidly to 20%, in 1995. After that, it witnessed a gradual decline until stood up at about 16%, in 2012.
Conversely
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, around 3% was the lowest ratio of Australian
exports
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 to China, in 1990. Following that, it saw an increase, until it represented the highest rate of
exports
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 from Australia, in 2012. In terms of the USA and
India
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, the proportion of
exports
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 to the US underwent a fluctuation, it started at about 11% and ended at about 6%.
However
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, the ratio of
exports
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 to
India
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 was very low, in 1990, at about 3%, it saw a slight increase to stop, at 5%, in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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