The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides key information about the proportion of
exports
from Australia to four world regions between 1990 and 2012, with units measured in percentages.
Overall
, it can be seen that Australian
exports
with
India
and the USA represented the lowest rate by the end of the period.
In addition
, Japan saw the highest ratio of Australian
exports
, in 1990,
whereas
the lowest percentage was experienced by China and
India
.
According to
what is shown, in 1990, 25% was the biggest rate of
exports
from Australia to Japan and declined rapidly to 20%, in 1995. After that, it witnessed a gradual decline until stood up at about 16%, in 2012.
Conversely
, around 3% was the lowest ratio of Australian
exports
to China, in 1990. Following that, it saw an increase, until it represented the highest rate of
exports
from Australia, in 2012. In terms of the USA and
India
, the proportion of
exports
to the US underwent a fluctuation, it started at about 11% and ended at about 6%.
However
, the ratio of
exports
to
India
was very low, in 1990, at about 3%, it saw a slight increase to stop, at 5%, in 2012.
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