the line chart below shows the amount of three types of fast food consumed in England from 1970 to 1900

the line chart below shows the amount of three types of fast food consumed in England from 1970 to 1900
The statistics regarding the
consumption
rate of three fast foods in England in a twenty-year period
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are
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illustrated in the
graph
.
Overall
, a
paralell
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parallel
growth in
consumption
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the consumption
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of fish and chips and hamburger is seen. Broadly speaking, the
consumption
of all three types of food experienced fluctuation throughout the course of time. At the beginning of the
graph
the items were
rankd
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ranked
as follows: pizza (300), Fish and chips(100), hamburger(30).
This
,
however
, was reversed by the end of the
graph
with fish and chips surpassing all
oher
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other
groups with
500
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a 500
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rate of
consumption
followed
with
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by
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hamburgers with almost 300 and pizza with 200. A closer look
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at
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the details reveals that the
consumption
of pizza experienced a very different trend than the rest of the items. It started a gradual decline at 300 in 1970 and reached 200 in 1985. After
that
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that,
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it went on a steady trend for the rest of the
graph
.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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