The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph given illustrates the production rates of three major types of
energy
sources from 1981 to 2000 in the UK. From
overall
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perspectives
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,
petroleum
was a main source
as well as
had the highest consumption during the period. Natural
gas
underwent a fluctuating rise,
however
, coal showed a reverse pattern. In 1981, the amount of
energy
that
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produced by
petroleum
was the highest value, at about 90
units
, and one
energy
unit is
a
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total of
energy
that
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collected from one million tones of oil. Meanwhile, coal
producted
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produced
about 80
energy
units
,
whereas
, natural
gas
contributed nearly 40
units
as well as
was the lowest number. There was
a
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significant growth in
petroleum
to about 140
units
in 1984 and it
had been
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maintaned
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maintained
for the next three years. After decreasing to 100
units
in 1990, the production of
petroleum
increased back to approximately 140
units
in the
last
year. Coal remained the same
to
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1982
then
it suddenly witnessed a huge drop to under 40
units
in 1984 compared to the same amount in that
of
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natural
gas
. After that, coal
recoverd
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recovered
to 60
units
in the period between 1986 and 1989 before gradually falling to about 30
units
in
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at
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the end of the period. The figure for natural
gas
stayed stable from 1981 to 1990 at 40
units
before rising steadily to 100
units
in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, petroleum, gas, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • time frame
  • location
  • data
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • specific data points
  • petroleum
  • nuclear fuel
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • fluctuations
  • correlations
  • patterns
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • provide
  • general summary
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