The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph given illustrates the production rates of three major types of
energy
sources from 1981 to 2000 in the UK.
From overall
Correct article usage
an overall
perspectives
, Fix the agreement mistake
perspective
petroleum
was a main source as well as
had the highest consumption during the period. Natural gas
underwent a fluctuating rise, however
, coal showed a reverse pattern.
In 1981, the amount of energy
that
produced by Correct pronoun usage
apply
petroleum
was the highest value, at about 90 units
, and one energy
unit is a
total of Correct article usage
the
energy
that
collected from one million tones of oil. Meanwhile, coal Correct pronoun usage
apply
producted
about 80 Correct your spelling
produced
energy
units
, whereas
, natural gas
contributed nearly 40 units
as well as
was the lowest number.
There was a
significant growth in Remove the article
apply
petroleum
to about 140 units
in 1984 and it had been
Wrong verb form
was
maintaned
for the next three years. After decreasing to 100 Correct your spelling
maintained
units
in 1990, the production of petroleum
increased back to approximately 140 units
in the last
year.
Coal remained the same to
1982 Change preposition
in
then
it suddenly witnessed a huge drop to under 40 units
in 1984 compared to the same amount in that of
natural Change preposition
apply
gas
. After that, coal recoverd
to 60 Correct your spelling
recovered
units
in the period between 1986 and 1989 before gradually falling to about 30 units
in
the end of the period. The figure for natural Change the preposition
at
gas
stayed stable from 1981 to 1990 at 40 units
before rising steadily to 100 units
in 2000.Submitted by khoihoangtrong96 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, petroleum, gas, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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