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The diagrams below show the life circle of a species of large fish called the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life circle of a species of large fish called the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams describe how a kind of big fish called the
salmon
 grows during its
lifepan
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life
. By and large, it can be seen that there are three main stages involved in the growth of the salmons, beginning with
salmon
 eggs in
upper
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the upper
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river
 and ending with adult salmons
come
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coming
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 back upper
river
 from
open
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the open
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 sea.
At the first stage
 of the growth,
salmon
 eggs are in the upper
river
 where water moves slowly. After approx 5 to 6 months
salmon
 eggs live under reeds and next to small stones, they develop into small fishes called fry, and these species are from 3 to 8 cm in size. The fry
move
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 down
lower
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the lower
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river
 where there is
fast
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a fast
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flowing
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, and they live
in
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there
about
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for
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approx
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 4 years. At the following step, before moving to
open
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the open
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 sea, the salmons called smolt have developed from the fry and they are from 12 to 15 cm in size.
Next,
the smolt
live
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 in the open sea approx 5 years.
Finally
, when their size
are
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is
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 from 70 to 76 cm called adult
salmon
, they come back
the
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to the
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 upper
river
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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