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The charts below show the most populer films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The charts below show the most populer films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.
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The below charts
depicts
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 the famous films for
males
 and females and the
sales
 of tickets for various movies in
USA
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the USA
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 in 2010. From the
table
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it is clear that
 men captured the most significant place in going to
cinema
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the cinema
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 except
romantic
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for romantic
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comedy
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comedies
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. The women dominate in romantic
comedy
,
while
 in other genres there is not
to
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too
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 much interest. Action movies are the most popular among
males
 with a number of 40 and it is the highest trend within all genres. In
comedy
 and
western
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 movies
males
 and females are in the same positions
accordingly
 20 and 10. In thriller and science fiction
males
 again experienced high
position
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positions
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 with a
number
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numbers
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 15 and 10.
In
contrast
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 women are six-fold higher in romantic
comedy
. When comes to
pie
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the pie
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 chart the interest
to
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 action tickets is nearly half of all sold ones with
the
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apply
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number 49 %. The
sales
 of
comedy
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the comedy
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 genre captured nearly
quarter
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a quarter
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 of total
sales
 with
the
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a
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 proportion of 24%. From the pie
chart
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chart,
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 it is
also
 clear that the
sales
 of tickets for
thriller
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thrillers
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 and romantic
comedy
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comedies
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is
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 in the lowest position as the figure for
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a thriller
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thriller
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thrillers
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 is 10% and for romantic
comedy
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comedies
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 is 12%. (Samir Nabiyev)
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