The charts below show the most populer films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.
The below charts
depicts
the famous films for Change the verb form
depict
males
and females and the sales
of tickets for various movies in USA
in 2010.
From the Correct article usage
the USA
table
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table,
it is clear that
men captured the most significant place in going to cinema
except Correct article usage
the cinema
romantic
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for romantic
comedy
. The women dominate in romantic Fix the agreement mistake
comedies
comedy
, while
in other genres there is not to
much interest.
Action movies are the most popular among Correct your spelling
too
males
with a number of 40 and it is the highest trend within all genres. In comedy
and western
movies Capitalize word
Western
males
and females are in the same positions accordingly
20 and 10. In thriller and science fiction males
again experienced high position
with a Fix the agreement mistake
positions
number
15 and 10. Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
In
contrast
women are six-fold higher in romantic Add a comma
contrast,
comedy
.
When comes to pie
chart the interest Correct article usage
the pie
to
action tickets is nearly half of all sold ones with Change preposition
in
the
number 49 %. The Correct article usage
apply
sales
of comedy
genre captured nearly Correct article usage
the comedy
quarter
of total Correct article usage
a quarter
sales
with the
proportion of 24%. From the pie Correct article usage
a
chart
it is Add a comma
chart,
also
clear that the sales
of tickets for thriller
and romantic Fix the agreement mistake
thrillers
comedy
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comedies
is
in the lowest position as the figure for Change the verb form
are
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a thriller
thriller
is 10% and for romantic Fix the agreement mistake
thrillers
comedy
is 12%.
(Samir Nabiyev)Fix the agreement mistake
comedies
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