The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in Two European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in

Two European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The bar charts
illustrates
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industrial sectors working
hours
weekly in two
european
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European
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contries
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countries
in 2002 including France and Denmark.
Overall
, it can be seen that the workers percentage who had 1 - 14
hours
and over 50
hours
both
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France and Denmark are relatively
same
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. Looking in more detail, in France, the employees that spent their working with duration 1-14, 41-45 and over 50
hours
stood at 10%.
Next,
workers
which
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experienced 15-20, 21-30 and 56-50
hours
were in range from over 10%-20%. Meanwhile,
majority
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people
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of people
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at
occupation
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office worked for 31-35 and 36-40
hours
namely 50% and over 30% respectively. In the meantime, in Denmark, 70%
people
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did their job for 36-40
hours
and 20% spent 31-35
hours
.
Moreover
, for people that were available or in working
hours
zone with duration
about
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1-30
hours
and 41-50+
hours
were only 10% for those durations.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • significant
  • industrial sector
  • working hours
  • productivity
  • employee well-being
  • policies
  • cultural factors
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