You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
#minutes #information #science #qualifications #people #two #countries #summarise #features #comparisons
The bar chart illustrates education levels in two Asian countries.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
people with no qualification in science have the highest percentage, Linking Words
Linking Words
however
master's degree holders are the lowest in both countries. Add a comma
however,
Moreover
, Linking Words
Singaporean
and Fix the agreement mistake
Singaporeans
Malayians
who hold master's degrees have the same rate.
Correct your spelling
Malaysians
According to
what is shown, Linking Words
individuals
without qualifications in science Change preposition
among individuals
are
nearly 60% are Unnecessary verb
apply
Malayians
and about 65% are Singaporean. Correct your spelling
Malaysians
While
those who leave school exams are almost a third. Linking Words
In addition
, Malaysia has higher ratios than Singapore in both categories.
In terms of higher education level, Singapore has double the ratio compared to Malaysia by 20% in bachelor's degrees. Linking Words
whereas
, when it comes to master's degrees, both nations have an equal percentage of approximately 5% .Linking Words
Submitted by neamaabdo90 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "ratios" was used 2 times.
▼