You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates education levels in two Asian countries.
Overall
,
it is clear that
people with no qualification in science have the highest percentage,
however
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master's degree holders are the lowest in both countries.
Moreover
,
Singaporean
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Singaporeans
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and
Malayians
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Malaysians
who hold master's degrees have the same rate.
According to
what is shown,
individuals
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without qualifications in science
are
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nearly 60% are
Malayians
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Malaysians
and about 65% are Singaporean.
While
those who leave school exams are almost a third.
In addition
, Malaysia has higher ratios than Singapore in both categories. In terms of higher education level, Singapore has double the ratio compared to Malaysia by 20% in bachelor's degrees.
whereas
, when it comes to master's degrees, both nations have an equal percentage of approximately 5% .
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratios" was used 2 times.
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