The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
The bar charts illustrate the data on the average weekly wage expenditure of
families
in a nation in a half-decade.
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the income of a family in 1968 was spent on families
' consumption. However
, in 2018 this
trend was changed and most of the income was allocated for hobbies and housing.
On the one hand, in 1968, about 35% of weekly income was spent on the
food Correct article usage
apply
wich
was the highest amount of expenditure of all periods. The housing and clothing sections Correct your spelling
which
was
stood at the same level with only one ten per cent of wage. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, all other types of costs of families
had similar shares , around 7%, but fuel and power cost
Fix the agreement mistake
costs
was
the least in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
compariosn
to other sections.
Correct your spelling
comparison
On the other hand
, in 2018, leisure activities by almost 23% proportions was
the part that Change the verb form
were
families
had to spend their money on it. While
housing and food with a minor difference to leisure activities' expenditure were
stood at the second most activities that Unnecessary verb
apply
families
spent on them. Although
,
the Remove the comma
apply
houshold
goods share was not changed over Correct your spelling
household
this
50-year period, the personal good
Fix the agreement mistake
goods
as well as
clothing and Fuel was
the lowest of costs Correct subject-verb agreement
were
between
American people with only one twenty per cent.Change preposition
among
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