The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14-to 16-year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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number
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the country
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country
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countries
where
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use
top
three foreign Correct article usage
the top
language
in the Change to a plural noun
languages
year
1984 and 2007.
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years
Overall
, the pupils who studied a foreign language
was
dominated by girls. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, french became the most languages
that Fix the agreement mistake
language
students
had
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Firstly
, the number
of female
gender who Fix the agreement mistake
females
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studied Unnecessary verb
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foreign
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a foreign
language
was about approximately 50 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
1984 and then
was
fell Unnecessary verb
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into
40 Change preposition
to
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
2007. Meanwhile, the number
of boys who had studied a foreign language
in the year
1984 only
about 30 Add a missing verb
was only
percent
. It then
decreased to 25 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
2007.
On the other hand
, the top language
were
studied by the pupils among Unnecessary verb
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three
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the three
language
(French, German, Spanish) was French with about 50 Change to a plural noun
languages
percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
students
in the year
1984. Meanwhile, it decreased about
a half Change preposition
by about
number
to 25 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
2007. Furthermore
, the number
of students
who studied German was
decreased to 15 Unnecessary verb
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percent
in the year
2007 whereas
its
about 20 Correct your spelling
it was
percent
in the year
1984. Conversely
, there was an increase in the number
of students
who studied Spanish with
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by
number
from 5 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
1984 to 10 percent
in 2007.Change the spelling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, language, year, students, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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