the chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.

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the proportion

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of

water

supplies which are used for different aims namely food, service, building, household, and manufacturing, in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007.

Overall

it is clear that

the majority of

water

consumption for

food

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the food

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industry

in 2 periods in terms of the usage

water

supply consumed for the building

industry

compared with other sectors. Turning to details

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manufacturing usage had a significant growth from 13

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to 25

percent

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.

Similarly

,

household

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households

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grew only 2

percent

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and touched

21

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mark in 2007.

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next ten years, the proportion of

water

used in the food

industry

remained unchanged, despite a slight decrease of 7%. In the same year, households consumed 21% of

water

, which was about twice the rate in the manufacturing

industry

. As for the rest of the industries,

while

the service sector accounts for a quarter of

water

consumption, the construction

industry

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only 2% of

water

.