The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.
The total consumption of renewable undeniable contribution to the
energy
in the United States from 1950 to 2000 is illustrated along with
its main sources in quadrillion.
Generally, it is notable that over the years, the rate of renewable energy
consumption has experienced a growing trend with hydroeletric
power being its primary source.
Correct your spelling
hydroelectric
hydro electric
Hydroeletric
power and wood showCorrect your spelling
Hydroelectric
Add an article
an
the
overall
growth of the usage rate of clean energy
in the US over the years by presenting a roughly parallel trend of imperceptive increase from well under 2 quadrillion in 1950 to almost 2.5 and 2 in the last
years respectively.
The other two energy
sources (Biofules
and wind) , Correct your spelling
Biofuels
however
, show a constant minimum of
contribution from 1980 to the end of the graph, prior to which they did not exist. Right after Change preposition
apply
1990
a slight yet steady improvement Add a comma
1990,
of
their usage is visible reaching roughly 1 quadrillion by Change preposition
in
end
.Add an article
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