The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from

 1949-2008.

 Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends

 and making comparisons where relevant.
The total consumption of renewable
energy
in the United States from 1950 to 2000 is illustrated
along with
its main sources in quadrillion. Generally, it is notable that over the years, the rate of renewable
energy
consumption has experienced a growing trend with
hydroeletric
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hydroelectric
hydro electric
power being its primary source.
Hydroeletric
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Hydroelectric
power and wood show
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undeniable contribution to the
overall
growth of the usage rate of clean
energy
in the US over the years by presenting a roughly parallel trend of imperceptive increase from well under 2 quadrillion in 1950 to almost 2.5 and 2 in the
last
years respectively. The other two
energy
sources (
Biofules
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Biofuels
and wind) ,
however
, show a constant minimum
of
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contribution from 1980 to the end of the graph, prior to which they did not exist. Right after
1990
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1990,
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a slight yet steady improvement
of
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their usage is visible reaching roughly 1 quadrillion by
end
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the end
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