The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures below demonstrate alternations of cutting tools that have been
making
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made
through in
the Stone Age. The cutting instrument had a lot of changes from 1.4 Change preposition
throughout
million
years
ago to 0.8 millon
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million
years
ago. Overall
, numerous transformations are evident and since 1.4million
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1.4 million
years
ago the the tool has undergone improvements in its shape.
The most notable alternation was accomplished in the front view, where the instrument has become more defined and polished, opening up many possibilities. In addition
, the tip become
more refined, Wrong verb form
became
while
the shape took a quite circular form. However
, I must highlight an alternation from the side view in its dimesions
, wherein it has become thinner but Correct your spelling
dimensions
also
more refined since 1.4 million
years
ago. At the same time, tool B comparing
to A has become more sharpened. Wrong verb form
compared
Another
positive transformations are evident from the back view, noticeable in its size and polish. Replace the adjective
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However
, the height remained the same in both diagrams.
Taken as a whole, the cutting utensil has a
undergone a couple of major changes since 1.4 Correct article usage
apply
million
years
ago. I can mention that the development had only positive improvements, making easier
and Correct pronoun usage
it easier
usefull
to use.Correct your spelling
useful
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