The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures below demonstrate alternations of cutting tools that have been

making

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through in

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the Stone Age. The cutting instrument had a lot of changes from 1.4

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years

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ago to 0.8

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million

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ago.

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, numerous transformations are evident and since

1.4million

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1.4 million

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ago the the tool has undergone improvements in its shape. The most notable alternation was accomplished in the front view, where the instrument has become more defined and polished, opening up many possibilities.

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, the tip

become

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more refined,

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the shape took a quite circular form.

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, I must highlight an alternation from the side view in its

dimesions

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dimensions

, wherein it has become thinner but

also

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more refined since 1.4

million

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years

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ago. At the same time, tool B

comparing

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to A has become more sharpened.

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positive transformations are evident from the back view, noticeable in its size and polish.

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, the height remained the same in both diagrams. Taken as a whole, the cutting utensil has

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undergone a couple of major changes since 1.4

million

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years

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ago. I can mention that the development had only positive improvements, making

easier

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it easier

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and

usefull

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useful

to use.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

192 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Stone Age
tools
cutting
development
rudimentary
sophisticated
progression
unworked pebbles
flake tools
bifacial tools
efficiency
materials
emergence
characteristics
functionality
craftsmanship
precision
hunting
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advancements
significance
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