The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given illustrates the quantity of a country's export earnings in a wide range of categories over the course of two years, from 2015 to 2016. Meanwhile, the table given demonstrates the fluctuation in the aforementioned
values
calculated in percentage during the same period.
It is clear that
all the listed
categories
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values
followed an upward trend except for gems and
jewellery's
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, in which the percentage change in textiles'
values
was the highest. Regarding the bar chart, the number of export earnings from petroleum
products
was the highest during both years with over 60
billions
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in 2015 and around 63
billions
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in 2016. The figures for engineering goods stood at the second place with around 58
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in 2015 and grew to approximately 63
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in the next year, being equivalent to the figures for petroleum goods. There was
a
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moderate growth in the value of agricultural
products
from roughly 31
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in 2015 to 31,5
billions
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in 2016. The value of textiles
also
witnessed a significant rise by nearly 10
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over the period.
Whereas
, gems and jewellery's value decreased slightly from about 43
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in 2015 to 41
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in 2016. Regarding the table, the percentage change in textiles'
values
topped the table with 15,24%, followed by the figure for engineering goods with approximately 7% less. The third position was occupied by gems and jewellery's proportion with 5,18%, being 3% less in comparison with the former figure. The
values
for petroleum
products
and agricultural
products
possessed the fourth and fifth places respectively with 3% and 0,81%.
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