The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The

chart

gives information about the rates of

minutes

who

uses

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mobile

call

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calls

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in the UK

which

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with

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three types in the years 1995 and 2002.

Overall

, the

chart

illustrated many call

type

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types

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local , national

and

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apply

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international and mobile .

It is clear that

the local trend was the highest trend in the

chart

in contrast

the mobile ( all calls ) made the lowest rate in the

chart

. Now

turnin

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turnin'

turning

to details in 1995 the black line was the lowest number in

chart

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the chart

a chart

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it was under 10

minutes

billion after that the trend

mobiles

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mobile

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growth

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grew

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gradually to reach in 2002 approximately 45

minutes

billions

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billion

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calls . National and international was

increasing

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increased

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moderately from 1995 to 2002 and they hit a peak when

reach

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reached

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minutes

billion

call

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calls

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in 2002 .

However

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the

figures's

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local was rose gradually til 1998 and 1999 after which

decline

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declined

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to reach above 70

minutes

billion

call

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calls

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

154 words

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