The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The
chart
gives information about the rates of minutes
who uses
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use
call
in the UK Fix the agreement mistake
calls
which
three types in the years 1995 and 2002.
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with
Overall
, the chart
illustrated many call type
local , national Fix the agreement mistake
types
and
international and mobile . Correct word choice
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the local trend was the highest trend in the chart
in contrast
the mobile ( all calls ) made the lowest rate in the chart
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Now turnin
to details in 1995 the black line was the lowest number in Correct your spelling
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chart
it was under 10 Add an article
the chart
a chart
minutes
billion after that the trend mobiles
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mobile
growth
gradually to reach in 2002 approximately 45 Replace the word
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minutes
billions
calls .
National and international was Fix the agreement mistake
billion
increasing
moderately from 1995 to 2002 and they hit a peak when Wrong verb form
increased
reach
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reached
to
60 Change preposition
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minutes
billion call
in 2002 . Change the form of the verb
calls
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decline
to reach above 70 Wrong verb form
declined
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calls
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