The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.
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The process below illustrates the stages of leather
production
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.
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, it can be seen that for producing leather
productions
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products
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has
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there are
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10 steps in which industrial machines play a key role. In the first stage of
production
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, some animal skins which are mainly from cows or sheep, are put outside to dry out. These dried
materials
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are transported by lorries to the industrial factories where the
production
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cycle will begin. After unloading the dry skins in factories, these
materials
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are sent to a big tub where they are washed in a liquid that contains water and lime. In the next stage, the soaked animal
skin
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is transferred to the flattening machine which contains a big roller that makes the
skin
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flatten. In the sixth part of the
production
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, the flattened
skin
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is imported into the container which is filled with Tannin
that is
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combination of water and vegetable
materials
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. Right after soaking at
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stage, the
skin
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will be polished with hot iron and will be ready to be carried by trucks to leather product factories. These polished
materials
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will be changed and transformed into products
such
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as bags and shoes for consumers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, materials, skin with synonyms.
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