The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.
The process below illustrates the stages of leather
production
.
Overall
, it can be seen that for producing leather
productions
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products
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has
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there are
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10 steps in which industrial machines play a key role. In the first stage of
production
, some animal skins which are mainly from cows or sheep, are put outside to dry out. These dried
materials
are transported by lorries to the industrial factories where the
production
cycle will begin. After unloading the dry skins in factories, these
materials
are sent to a big tub where they are washed in a liquid that contains water and lime. In the next stage, the soaked animal
skin
is transferred to the flattening machine which contains a big roller that makes the
skin
flatten. In the sixth part of the
production
, the flattened
skin
is imported into the container which is filled with Tannin
that is
combination of water and vegetable
materials
. Right after soaking at
this
stage, the
skin
will be polished with hot iron and will be ready to be carried by trucks to leather product factories. These polished
materials
will be changed and transformed into products
such
as bags and shoes for consumers.
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