The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.
The process below illustrates the stages of leather
production
. Overall
, it can be seen that for producing leather productions
Replace the word
products
has
10 steps in which industrial machines play a key role.
In the first stage of Verb problem
there are
production
, some animal skins which are mainly from cows or sheep, are put outside to dry out. These dried materials
are transported by lorries to the industrial factories where the production
cycle will begin. After unloading the dry skins in factories, these materials
are sent to a big tub where they are washed in a liquid that contains water and lime. In the next stage, the soaked animal skin
is transferred to the flattening machine which contains a big roller that makes the skin
flatten.
In the sixth part of the production
, the flattened skin
is imported into the container which is filled with Tannin that is
combination of water and vegetable materials
. Right after soaking at this
stage, the skin
will be polished with hot iron and will be ready to be carried by trucks to leather product factories. These polished materials
will be changed and transformed into products such
as bags and shoes for consumers.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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