The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four ASEAN countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four ASEAN countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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chart provides a
percentage
of the
population
living in cities. The graph links between years and
percentage
of the
population
.
Overall
, Malaysia's
percentage
is bigger than other cities.
According to
the
graph
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there is a huge increase in the
percentage
of the
population
. It is clear to see that Malaysia is the first city with an increase in
population
with 80% till 2040 and
that is
about a 50% change since 1970. In 1970, Philipins started to increase slowly from 30%
then
it reached 50% by 2040 which is the highest point since 1990. Between 1970 and 2040, there is a clear change in Thailand boomed from 20% to 45% Over the double.
Also
, Indonesia's
percentage
has increased quartile times to 60% from 15%. Regarding the giving
data
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it is noticeable that the number of people has increased with time. The lowest
percentage
reached 15% of Indonesia's
population
while
the highest
percentage
reached 80% of Malaysia.
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