the bar chart describe the percentage of peop by age groups using internet in the UK from 2003 to 2006

the bar chart describe the percentage of peop by age groups using internet in the UK from 2003 to 2006
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of individuals by
age
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groups spending time on
Internet
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the Internet
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in the UK from 2003 to 2006.
Overall
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, interest in resident's use of
Internet
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the Internet
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decrease when they get older and older.
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, at 16-24 years old the picture depicts the highest percentages , especially in 2005 it is 100% which was the peak point on the chart and in 2003 and 2004 it was the same amount 80%. 2006 got its highest amount by 90% in those ages,
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, at the
age
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group of 25-44 it decreased just 10% and remained same at the
age
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band of 45-54. At the
age
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of 25-44, all other years fell down their interests. At the
age
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group of 55-64, all the percentages' decline can be seen in all years,
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, the lowest decrease was in 2006 and it kept its championship by 50%. At the
age
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classification of 65+, every year reduced their quantity and they were lower than 20% but it was 20% in 2006.
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, surprisingly the amount of internet use was 0% in 2003.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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