Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to child's development as other subjects, so it shoube compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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art
is an essential subject as other subjects to Use synonyms
growth
children more advanced. It must be done in high schools. Replace the word
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essay agrees with Linking Words
this
viewpoint and will now set out some examples of the benefits of Linking Words
art
classes to support that reasoning.
It is vital to understand that Use synonyms
art
is Use synonyms
important
subject to improve Add an article
an important
child's
creativity. Painting and drawing can express their feeling and imagination. Correct article usage
a child's
Moreover
, it can improve their skills to deal with a difficult problem or Linking Words
another subjects
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another subject
other subjects
such
as math. Linking Words
For instance
, when students Linking Words
painting
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paint
drawing
they will think out of the box or develop the power of thinking.
Another point to consider is that an ability that you can develop with training and practice effectively. Wrong verb form
draw
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art
can Use synonyms
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entertain Verb problem
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and stressful
stressful
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, they can look Linking Words
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for
job
after they have Fix the agreement mistake
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degree Add an article
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in
art
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architect
or engineerCorrect article usage
an architect
a
person Add a missing verb
is a
who
job is Correct pronoun usage
whose
designing
buildings to develop their mind.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
to design
art
improves Use synonyms
child's
creativity or child's skill. Correct article usage
a child's
Thus
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this
essay has shown Linking Words
art
classes are important for children.Use synonyms
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