You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, •Let your landlord know that you will be leaving •Thank you landlord for his/her help •Tel him/her about your friend
Hello John,
I hope
this
letter find
you in high spirits. Change the verb form
finds
Its
been a Replace the word
It's
It is
while
we
met each other. I feel very happy to be your tenant. Do you remember, I discussed with you that Correct word choice
since we
i
have applied for a job in Change the capitalization
I
other province
. I am very excited to let you know that I got Change the wording
another province
other provinces
the
job in a real estate corporation. I will be moving there Correct article usage
a
on
the end of Change preposition
at
this
month, as I have to start my work in the first week of next month. For
this
reason, I have to leave your apartment.
Moreover
, all I have is my heartfelt gratitude to you. I know when I moved here, I was not aware about
anything and you helped me a lot. I remember the incident when Change the preposition
of
i
lost all my money and no one was ready to help out. You helped me financially and gave me emotional support. Things were not going well on my end but god sent you to me as a gift, you are a blessed soul.
To add, I Change the capitalization
I
also
want to inform you that one of my friend
is interested Change to a plural noun
friends
to move
Change preposition
in moving
to
your apartment. He is my childhood friend, Change preposition
into
we
both completed Correct word choice
and we
our
high school together. He is Correct pronoun usage
apply
very
responsible and mature person. I trust him always. I just want you to meet him once and decide about his moving to your place.
See you soon!
Take care,
BaljeetAdd an article
a very
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a single clear idea. Your letter has a good flow, but occasionally multiple ideas are included in one paragraph, which can be streamlined for better coherence.
task achievement
You could add a bit more specific information about your friend's suitability for renting the apartment to strengthen your recommendation.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are friendly yet appropriate for the context, which suits the tone of the letter well.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is very suitable, showing gratitude and maintaining a cordial relationship with the landlord.