While
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that the usage of mobile
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in certain
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should be banned like smoking, others argue that raising awareness of cell
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to be
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instead
. Both
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and reasons why I agree with the latter
will be elaborated on in
this
essay.
To begin
with, it may seem sensible for some to believe that smartphones must not allowed in some
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.
This
is
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because inappropriate uses of mobile
phoneFix the agreement mistake
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can considered
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disturbance towards others
such
as noise pollution or flashy
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.
For instance
, it can be clearly seen in the movie theatre as people need
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concentration to focus on the movie and it is rude and annoying to hear people making
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down the
phone
.
Secondly
, it could lead to a legal issue
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smartphone users . Take
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,
for example
; it
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from any recordings except
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who have
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of the official authorities as it will considered to violate the personal privacy of other patients
as well as
the medical staff.
However
, many
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of
this
idea might oppose that restricting the use of
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is somewhat .
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explain, encouraging
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manner of using
this
technology can create a
prolongChange the form of the verb
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solution. To exemplify, just like the
sayingsFix the agreement mistake
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"where there is a will, there is a way", some
peoplesFix the agreement mistake
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who
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stubborn and
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to use
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will always seek their way to use it.
Therefore
, I personally argue in favour of focusing on the proper
seeing that
this
should applied equally and
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difficult to prohibit, especially in terms of dealing with massive crowds. To illustrate, in a concert setting
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similar to theatre
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we should
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through our eyes not our
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. In
this
respect, the manner of using
this
gadget should be
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rather than prohibited.
In conclusion,
although
it is undeniable that mobile phones create some dissatisfactions toward
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society
in particular
space and banning should be taken into consideration, I am of the opinion that in order to generate a
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solution yet building up a manner.