The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.
The line graphs illustrate how the percentages of Australian
export
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changed from 1990 to 2012 in four different nations namely Japan,
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the U.S
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U.S
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U.S.
,
China
and
India
. Units were measured in the form of
percentage
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percentages
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.
Overall
, what stands out the most from the line chart is that
export
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rates of
China
had
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dramatically increased.
China
ranked the highest
percentage
in
exports
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rates in 2012,
while
India
ranked the lowest in the given
year
.
Tho
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The
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most significant difference in the
percentage
between
China
and
India
was found in the
year
of
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2012. In terms of
year
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1990, Japan ranked
first,
being about 27 per
cent
of total Australian export rates, followed by
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the U.S.
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and
China
, having around 12 and 2 per
cent
, respectively. The most marginal
percentage
reported was
India
with approximately 3.5 per
cent
. With regards
of
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year
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2010,
China
was the highest with about 26 per
cent
, and
this
figure was around 21 per
cent
higher than that of 2000.
In contrast
,
U.S.
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had about 6
percent
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per cent
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where the
percentage
decreased significantly from 12 per
cent
in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india, percentage, year, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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