The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK from 2001 and 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five protains of fruits and vegatables per day in the UK  from 2001 and 2008
The given bar chart illustrates the number of individuals
such
as men, women and children who have had
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fruit
and
vegtables
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vegetables
five times in a day from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
it can be seen that women are the most
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consumer
in all given years.
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According
to the data, more than 20% of women
have eaten
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five
propotions
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portions
of
vegetations
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and
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fruit
in 2001.
this
number increased to more than 35%
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until
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2007, when it
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started
to fall to approximately 32% and had a slight
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decrease
to 30% in 2008.
On the other hand
,
this
rate was only 17% for men at the beginning and it
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out for 3 years and
then
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experienced a
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small
rise to 27% in 2006.
However
, in 2008 it finished with a minimum decrease
to
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26%. In terms of children, they were
in
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the bottom
in
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this
list with only 12% in 2001.
This
percentage remained steady for 3 years until 2003 and
then
had a steady increase toward the end of the period with 25% in 2007 followed by a sink to 22% in 2008.
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